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Exercice de TD · niveau 2 · anglais (première), chapitre 7 — Expressing oneself · L'essai argumenté
Énoncé
Réécrivez ce paragraphe pour l'améliorer : introduisez des discourse markers et supprimez les contractions et les répétitions de very.
« Social media has changed public discourse. It's very useful for activism. It's very dangerous for privacy. It's used by very many people. »
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Exemple d'amélioration :<br> Social media has profoundly transformed public discourse. On the one hand, it is highly useful for activism, enabling grassroots movements to gain visibility worldwide. On the other hand, it is deeply dangerous for privacy, as personal data is often collected and monetised. Furthermore, it is used by a vast majority of the global population, which amplifies both its benefits and its risks.
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